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留学的PS是什么?

留学小白会问:PS, RL,CV都是什么呢?要怎么写呢?小翼君给你慢慢科普~ PS (PERSONAL STATEMENT)就是个人陈述,是申请国外大学时需要由申请人写的一篇有关自我介绍的漫谈式文章。
  留学PS是申请材料中最重要的内容之一。之所以重要,是因为国外的教授们要通过PS来了解申请人在其他申请材料中没有表现出来的方面,比如学术看法、申请者的性格特点、对所学专业或申请学校的认知等等;其实教授们要看成百上千的申请材料,每一份材料上,他的目光之多只停留几秒钟,所以PS一定要有亮点“钩住”他的目光,让他对你的材料产生兴趣——这就是PS的重要之处,也是写它的困难之所在。
通常情况下,PS的写作角度将会围绕以下几个方面做出说明:为什么选择这个专业、为什么选择这所学校、你的兴趣性格是如何匹配这所学校与这个专业的,以及你的潜力与未来规划所在。(就是我为什么适合被录取,录取了我有什么好处?)
在措辞文笔上,写明“你做过什么”,但不可过分炫耀成就。以英文思路撰写,避免中文翻译思维。去除冗长无关的文字,控制文章长度在1-2页左右。
在未来的日子里,小翼君会与大家分享由学翼国际送出的留学生所写的文书范文,为大家提供参考。让你看看你的“竞争对手”水准如何。当然,每一篇文书都是学翼的留学老师与同学共同努力、润色、修饰的结果。
PS范文 01

新闻传媒专业文书
It’s all about the headline. It’s about getting your point across in the most direct way you can. These personal statements are very good example of this, in just a few lines I have to get my message of why I want do a degree in Journalism across to my prospective universities. That is one of the reasons why I love to write, the challenge of putting over a complex thought or concept to a large audience of people and convey it in such a way everybody will understand it. As the great writer Hemingway once said, “My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way.”

My own personal experience of journalism started young, my dad used to write for a magazine and take me with him when he went to interview people, since then I have been fascinated with the industry. When I was 14 I was lucky enough to get a work experience placement at “News International” in Wapping. I got to work on the websites of “FiredUp.com”, “Revolver.com” and “Page3.com” as well as have a tour of the offices of “The Sun”, “News Of The World” and “The Times”, I have also recently been offered a day’s work experience at my local paper and I am currently waiting for news of work experience at the BBC.

I pride myself on being well organised and thorough in my research. I have also developed many skills such as interview techniques and being able to see things from another perspective, a skill I
have acquired through Sociology and Communication Studies, analytical skills through Film Studies and Media Studies and I have learnt about analysing and collating numerical data and factual evidence in Psychology. Although I have already completed three A-Levels and two AS Levels, I have taken a year out to study AS French, Sociology and Spanish. I did this in order to improve my grades and to give me a wider choice of qualifications as my previous subjects are all very similar with their syllabus as well the fact multiple languages would be an invaluable advantage to have when working in the area of communication.

Some of my outside interests are music, politics, the Internet and reading. Music in particular is a great love of mine, I regularly attend “gigs” and concerts and have been an active member of the “Sum 41 Street Team” for over a year, this involves spreading publicity through flyers and posters to promote the band, I find it very fulfilling and enjoyable. Another one of my interests is the Internet, I contribute articles to a site dealing with issues such as “top-up fees” and other important student matters, which I enjoy greatly and is helping to improve my knowledge of university for the future. I have a part time job waitressing at a local hotel which I do a few nights a week. It gives me a sense of my own independence and responsibility, I also help my mother at the local Red Cross during half terms and holidays cooking for the elderly and have also recently volunteered to sell Poppies for Remembrance Sunday throughout my town. Another activity of mine is being my tutor group representative for our college’s student council and regularly attend meetings to deal with concerns of the student body.

I am thoughtful, organised and handle pressure well, I love to write and it is my ambition to do so, I believe I can bring many things to the courses I have selected and in turn can get a lot out of them as well.
PS范文 02

教育学专业文书

I choose to apply for the English Teaching department in your esteemed university not only for my great interest and burning enthusiasm in this field, but also because I am really determined to be involved in the related study and work in the coming future. I have decided that I will contribute all of my life in English Teaching. My career goal is to become an outstanding English teacher stepping into the new period in order to apply the more scientific teaching methods and ways into practice. That is just where my interest lies.

Meanwhile, I must acknowledge that my choice of TESOL never comes from my hot mind, but from the continuous learning and practices. So, it is actually a determination rather than a mere choice. Taking advantage of my excellent score in English learning, I have been involved in the social work as family teacher as well as attending some professional trainingto broaden my horizon since my freshman year. Theformer experiences enabled me to find that it is really exciting to be devoted to English Teaching field and such kind of excitation used to roll up in me every time, which made me believe that it is just the enterprise that I will be devoted to with my whole life.

Cherishing this determination, I began to make insistent efforts to achieve my dream by participating more teaching activities to accumulate the related experiences. It still occurs to me that once in an activity, I met with a student with very poor foundation in English. However, during my contact with him, I found that he was actually gifted in language learning and his English is poor just because he dislikes the boring “signals” without any “nutrition”. Taking his interest into full account, I brought out one of my speeches before and he turned out to be deeply attracted by the words of “Wine is soaking, memories are passing. Wound is recovering, just for never forgetting.” He told me that it is the first time for him to realize that English can also express the sorrows so incisively and vividly. In this way, I successful lightened his interest in English, according to which I designed a special teaching scheme for him with the Tagore poems instead of traditional texts or grammar. Besides, I even advised him to read the English edition of “The Book of Songs” to cultivate his interest and feelings to the new language. Meanwhile, I also found some original edition of “English and American Literature”, telling him to translate them into his interested literary form. Benefiting from my special teaching scheme on him, his interest in English was being heated, which witnessed his great improvement in English reading ability. This successful experience presented me with much more confidence for my future work.

The following teaching experiences after that enabled me to realize that few people are learning English as a kind of language, but as a kind of science like mathematics. So the sentence patterns are just like the mathematical formulas that are tormenting their memories since they can only put all the sentences into “frameworks”. In this way, they will easily get puzzled once the expression is changed because they are fettered in the grammar or the stupid “sentence patterns” with little understanding on the flexibility of a language. Thus, during my teaching, I have been trying to tell all of my students that grammar is just a way to help us to express our ideas in a scientific and acceptable way and they can actually write any thing in their own manner instead of thinking too much of the grammar requirements. However, I realized that my teaching way is not enough to pull up the root of the problem though I actually help a few of the students indeed because under Chinese boring education, English can be only considered as a subject instead of a language, which is just the problem existing in Chinese education system.

Therefore, I hope to find a more suitable English teaching methodfor Chinese students, which can pull them out of the fixed clues by telling them that language is not just a tool, but also anexpression and communication that carries full emotions of human beings. Generally, I have every reason to believe that cherishing this kind of attitude and enthusiasm, I must be able to make more achievements after the study in your gorgeous learning institute, which will largely improve my personal professional quality and abilities and promote me to achieve my career goal in the coming future.
自己写的文书不知道是不是吸引人?
没思路、无从下手,需要点灵感?
写好的PS需要润色?
你需要大神帮忙!
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